~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

HI Lisa, you managed to bash the government and praise God all in one short poem. You made me smile.

The hardest part for me in writing this form was keeping the words at 7 letters or less, looks like you had the same problem. "judgment" and "Holiness" are technically both too long for this verse form. The big challenge would be to find good 7 letter words to replace them. ~~smile~~

~~Tink