\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/3170137
Item Icon
Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #2149424

Share your lyrical worlds here and receive a review just for entering!

<< Previous  •  Message List  •  Next >>
Reply  •  Post New
Mar 7, 2018 at 6:47pm
#3170137
Edited: March 7, 2018 at 7:17pm
THE WOODEN FENCE PICTURE.
As children we gathered
Down by the brook
That flowed by the wooden fence
Armoured with fishing nets
and water pails
fishing for tadpoles
Sat upon the old wooden fence
made with branches from the trees
Wearing short trouser and showing bare knees.

About fifty words counting tittle and my name.


{Mary Ann MCPhedran Angle's Army}
{Mary Ann MCPhedran Newbie Academy.}
MESSAGE THREAD
*Star*
THE WOODEN FENCE PICTURE. · 03-07-18 6:47pm
by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author IconMail Icon
Re: THE WOODEN FENCE PICTURE. · 03-07-18 9:22pm
by Past Member 'bobturn'
Re: Re: THE WOODEN FENCE PICTURE. · 03-08-18 12:28am
by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author IconMail Icon

The following applies to this forum item as a whole, not this post. Feedback sent here will go to the forum's owner, Ray Scrivener.
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/3170137