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Aug 23, 2018 at 2:40pm

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia

by Dave

The third foot of the third line in the second stanza is questionable, as I read it "ONCE and," but otherwise your iambic tetrameter is flawless.

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