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Aug 23, 2018 at 7:32pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia
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1) What if I changed line 3, stanza 2 to:

"I'll get him back and make him sprawl"



2) Would the poem be more effective if I eliminated the last stanza?



3) How "obvious" is this an Epinicia? Your thoughts.





Thanks, Dave!
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Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-16-18 4:49pm
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Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-16-18 6:01pm
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-17-18 10:37am
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Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-22-18 6:09pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-23-18 2:40pm
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*Star* Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-23-18 7:32pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-24-18 10:55am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-24-18 11:34am
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Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-17-18 11:36am
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-18-18 3:16pm
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Re: Tink's Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-18-18 8:55pm
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Re: Re: Tink's Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-19-18 12:15pm
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Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-18-18 9:55pm
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Epinicia · 08-19-18 12:17pm
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