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Aug 29, 2018 at 11:18am

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Re: Re: The Rhythms of Language

by Dave

Yes, it does. The rhythm is there in spite of the twisted syntax in the last two lines to maintain the rhyming pattern.

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Re: Re: Re: Re: The Rhythms of Language · 08-28-18 6:50pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: The Rhythms of Language · 08-29-18 3:09am
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