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Rated: E · Message Forum · How-To/Advice · #2164831

A forum where I ask questions to strengthen your story, fix plot holes, and much more!

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Sep 15, 2018 at 8:47pm
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I'm glad this is working, Emily Author Icon!

While reading this I had a sudden idea, what if ALTO starts off as an ordinary corporation, then secretly creates a virus that brings the world to its knees, forcing the government to adopt the program.

I really like how this story is turning out.

Also, what does the technology in this era look like? Is it advanced or just slightly improved?

-The Tin Woodsman
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Well, this is an interesting forum! · 09-13-18 8:29am
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Re: Well, this is an interesting forum! · 09-15-18 2:12pm
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