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I'm glad this is working, Emily While reading this I had a sudden idea, what if ALTO starts off as an ordinary corporation, then secretly creates a virus that brings the world to its knees, forcing the government to adopt the program. I really like how this story is turning out. Also, what does the technology in this era look like? Is it advanced or just slightly improved? -The Tin Woodsman |