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A place to request in-depth reviews of your novel's opening chapter ONLY. Any genre/rating
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Sep 21, 2018 at 8:25am
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by Yendi
Please take a look at my chapter 1 and let me know what you think. Any help you can give me will be greatly appreciated.

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Walking home from the movies, Jace and Luka save a young man attacked by a vampire.
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Submission · 09-21-18 8:25am
by Yendi
Re: Submission · 09-21-18 2:05pm
by Robert Edward Baker

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