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Nov 28, 2018 at 12:29am
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What Happens When You Overuse Passive Voice
A rebel ship that was carrying Princess Leia was fired upon by an Imperial ship. The rebel ship was hit. Security forces were sent to guard the main opening. A sense of hopelessness was felt by two droids who were on the ship. The rebel ship was then absorbed by the Imperial ship. The rebel ship's main door was then breached and the ship was boarded by Stormtroopers, who were the Empire's soldiers. Both sides were fired upon by each other. A path was cleared by the Stormtroopers. The ship was then boarded by Darth Vader, who was the leader of the batallion of Stormtroopers. A secret message was given to the droids by Princess Leia. An escape pod was then boarded by the droids as the main computer was searched by Stormtroopers. Allegedly intercepted plans were what the Stormtroopers were searching for. A man was captured by the Stormtroopers, who were told by the man that no such plans were on the ship. The man was then killed by Darth Vader. The escape pod was launched, but it was not fired upon because no life forms were thought to be on board.
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What Happens When You Overuse Passive Voice · 11-28-18 12:29am
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