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Dec 13, 2018 at 11:10am
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Re: my ya du winter poem
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walking in snow
on a cold (should rhyme with "snow") night
winter (this syllable should rhyme with "snow") old friend
the world becomes so cold--the third and the last syllables of this line should rhyme with "friend."

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Dave
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my ya du winter poem · 12-13-18 6:30am
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