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I think I'm getting a handle on free verse, but not sure.... I been working on entries for the 24 syllable poem contest which has allowed me to work with poems I can fit in my head... anyway, I tried to structure "Butterflies" to mimic the fluttering of a butterfly in flight. It still seems a bit too much like prose to me....

UPDATE: I feel I was able to improve rhythm by use of "B's" and long "i's." Much happier with it now.

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