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Dec 13, 2018 at 4:09pm

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Re: Re: Re: Rhychus's Structure of Free Verse

by Vanishing Vapor

3,333 GPs were sent to Dave

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You've no idea how much I appreciate your advice, and you are so right. Just changing "have" to "show" made a great improvement and with more work... well, who knows. Thank you, again and again!

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The Structure of Free Verse · 12-10-18 4:56pm
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Re: Re: The Structure of Free Verse · 12-11-18 12:48am
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Re: The Structure of Free Verse · 12-11-18 2:24pm
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Re: Re: Rhychus's Structure of Free Verse · 12-11-18 5:12pm
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Re: The Structure of Free Verse · 12-11-18 7:14pm
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Re: Re: Gypsy Ann's Structure of Free Verse · 12-12-18 11:17am
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Re: The Structure of Free Verse · 12-13-18 12:26pm
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Re: Re: Rhychus's Structure of Free Verse · 12-13-18 3:47pm
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Re: Re: Re: Rhychus's Structure of Free Verse · 12-13-18 4:09pm
by Vanishing Vapor

Re: Re: The Structure of Free Verse · 12-15-18 4:09pm
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