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Dec 13, 2018 at 11:01pm
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Re: Form of the week: Ravenfly
The Ravenfly is a decastitch (ten-line poem) invented by Amanda J. Norton, writing on the Allpoetry website. The ten lines are broken into two quatrains with an alternating syllable and rhyme pattern of 8a,7b,8a,7b 8c,7d,8c,7d followed by a rhyming couplet with 10 syllables per line,





Heaven’s Gate
By Lisa Noe*Cat*

I lay afraid and all alone
In my lone hospital bed
As the sun has brightly shown
I dream to myself, I am dead

I follow the light that shown bright
Where I see a golden gate
What a surprise, it is a sight
I saw Him, He said, “It’s fate.”

It was my most precious daddy you see
He told me, “You must always be with me.”





Lisa Noe - kitty love signature
four time Quill winner *Laugh*
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Form of the week: Ravenfly · 12-13-18 6:52pm
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