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Dec 28, 2018 at 12:00am

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Re: Form of the week: Ronka

by Vanishing Vapor

I hope I did it right. I tried to concentrate on the "outside and inside or internal" aspect which I found most interesting.

She's happy to announce the laundry's done,
I'm happy to see her proudly smiling,
However, huge piles of clean clothes abound,
I wonder about her concept of "done,"
This old bed is way too comfortable.

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Form of the week: Ronka · 12-27-18 7:11pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-27-18 7:36pm
by Lisa Noe

Re: Lisa's: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-27-18 10:20pm
by Tinker

Re: Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 9:53am
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-27-18 8:14pm
by 🌻 pwheeler ~ love joy peace

Re: Re: Phyllis's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 9:59am
by Dave

Re: Tink's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-27-18 10:19pm
by Tinker

Re: Re: Tink's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 10:03am
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 12:00am
by Vanishing Vapor

Re: Re: Rhychus's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 10:06am
by Dave

Re: Rhychus: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 2:51pm
by Tinker

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 9:57am
by Dan I Am

Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 10:09am
by Dave

Re: Mordee's : Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 2:53pm
by Tinker

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 2:42pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Monty's: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 2:58pm
by Tinker

Re: Re: Monty's: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 3:03pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Re: Monty's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-28-18 7:08pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-29-18 10:40am
by The Dark Faery

Re: Re: Gypsy Ann's Form of the week: Ronka · 12-29-18 3:59pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-31-18 11:33am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 12-31-18 11:48am
by The Dark Faery

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 01-02-19 1:32am
by Jay O'Toole

Re: Re: Jay's Form of the week: Ronka · 01-02-19 3:53pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Jay's Form of the week: Ronka · 01-02-19 11:11pm
by Jay O'Toole

Re: Form of the week: Ronka · 01-07-19 7:20pm
by A Non-Existent User

Re: Re: everyjones's Form of the week: Ronka · 01-08-19 11:14am
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: everyjones's Form of the week: Ronka · 01-28-19 12:57am
by JCosmos

Re: Re: Re: Re: Jake's Form of the week: Ronka · 01-28-19 10:15am
by Dave

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