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Jan 10, 2019 at 4:52pm

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Re: Re: Tink’s Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality

by Dave

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Interesting metaphor, but the "ocean" seems a bit cool for the passions involved. I think I would go for a volcano with

and from the darkest depth
at the ocean’s floor planet's core

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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Re: Tink’s Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 01-08-19 1:33pm
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Re: Re: Tink’s Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 01-10-19 4:52pm
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Re: Re: Re: Tink’s Emotional Honesty vs. Sentimentality · 01-11-19 10:42am
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