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Jan 19, 2019 at 12:34pm
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Re: Re: Form of the week: The de Tabley
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
I love the poem Jay. But technically, L1 of each stanza begins with a trochee. Dum da da dum da dum da dum da dum. You wrote every line entirely in iambic pentameter. Just wanted to point that out if you should give this form a try in the future.
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