~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Nice try, but no cigar.

Lines 2, 3, 4, and 5 should begin as follows:

has
past (picky, picky: this should be "passed")
the
Azores

Rhyme scheme should be aabba instead of ababa.

Thank you for your continuing generous support!

Let the creativity flow from your soul!
Dave
"The Poet's Place "