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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #896794

Enter your story of 300 words or less.

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Apr 2, 2019 at 10:18pm
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Re: Little Yellow Beast
by Paul Author IconMail Icon
You haven’t done it wrong, but using your portfolio to post the stories is a cleaner way.

It’s a cute story too. I have 3 daughters and I have VERY VIVID memories of exactly that. Thousands of other times their lives were destroyed and “I’ll never be able to show my face there agains.” Many “I have to change schools” too.

Also either use a blank line between paragraphs or indent, it makes for better readability.

Keep up the good work, or the bad work because at the beginning they’re not perfect. Just keep writing.

Stay safe and enjoy life.
Paul🐸
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Little Yellow Beast · 04-02-19 7:03am
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Re: Little Yellow Beast · 04-02-19 7:24am
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*Star* Re: Little Yellow Beast · 04-02-19 10:18pm
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