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Seeking experienced betas!

In a land where all men, women, and children must fight to survive, Kate Ellery has risen to the challenge of becoming a warrior—but she wants nothing more than for the war to end. Her country’s king is corrupt, allowing his men to pillage and murder freely. Kate endeavors to learn why he allows such senseless violence, and soon uncovers a motive she never could have imagined.
The king claims Kate will have a role to play in saving her country—but he also claims his actions have been just. That alone is enough to condemn him as insane, and she would… if not for the increasingly disturbing visions that plague her night and day. When the king shows Kate a portrait of the man from her dreams—someone she never imagined could be real—Kate is forced to question everything she believes.
With the fate of her country at stake, Kate races to uncover the truth about Dreslyn, the war, and the mysterious man at the heart of it all.

The King’s Secret is an approx. 324 page/74k word young adult fantasy adventure novel. The manuscript has been through several rounds of betas and edits and is finally as polished as I can get it. I’m looking for feedback from a final round of readers. I’m seeking betas who enjoy providing large amounts of feedback and are willing to thoroughly answer a list of questions for each chapter. If this sounds like the type of project you would enjoy, please get in touch. I greatly appreciate your time and interest! :)