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Jul 11, 2019 at 6:57pm
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Re: Form of the week: Egg Timer


Apparently invented by Dorian Peterson Potter, since all known samples were written by her.
It is an unrhymed decastich with a syllabic pattern 5-4-3-2-1-1-2-3-4-5.
The last five lines are the mirror image of the first five lines.



Hate
By Lisa Noe

Hate is most rotten
Feelings are sad
Breaking free
Great love
Show
Show
Great love
Breaking free
Feelings are sad
Hate is most rotten.

Lisa Noe - kitty love signature
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