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Jul 23, 2019 at 9:59am
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Edited: July 23, 2019 at 10:00am
Re: the Wordy Jay's Form of the week: Raay/Rei
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Wretched Love

Please don't say goodbye,
I still love you so . . .

No matter what is
disturbing your mind,
blinding your heart might
spite me but hurt you . . .

Two can play the blame
game round after round,
pounding away at
matters that, well, don't . . .

Won't you fight for us?
Must you insist on
donning a mask and
standing aloof? Why??

Crying and busting
things up in hateful
foolishness is what
got us here again . . .

Feigning happiness
just doesn't cut it.
Bitterness seeps in
instead, and love dies . . .

Eyes filled with tears, I
cry my last goodbye . . .



Muse got a little "dark", lol.
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Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-18-19 4:11pm
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Re: Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-20-19 9:51am
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Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-20-19 11:33am
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Re: Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-20-19 1:36pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-20-19 2:01pm
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Re: Re: WakeUpAndLive's Form of the week: Raay/Rei · 07-20-19 5:20pm
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