~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Hi Monty, I am sure rhyme is at the discretion of the poet. I liked it.

I struggle with synesthesia too. You use a lot of colors but they all describe a noun (animal), which is normal. I think at least one of the lines has to have the color describe the sound or action. So if you chose just to make a small change like:

if
" the blue-black crow screams caw"
changed to
"the crow screams a blue-black caw," That is synesthesia.

Haha, this helped me understand it better just by trying to explain it to you. Thanks. Now I hope Dave doesn't come back and say no, I'm wrong.

~~Tink