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Aug 2, 2019 at 11:14am
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Re: jake's scallop
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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Delicious darkness!

Third line has seven syllables, should be six.

The second four syllable line to rhyme with "life" is missing. This should be a six line stanza.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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jake's scallop · 08-02-19 4:07am
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Re: jake's scallop · 08-02-19 10:01am
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