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A contest to show off your new skills. For Writing.Com's Birthday Week.
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Sep 2, 2019 at 10:40am
by Emily
Honestly, I wasn't planning on entering this contest, but then Elle (she/her) reminded me of a certain poem I wrote a long while ago, and that set my fingers off. Sooooo, here's my rewrite of my poem from 2013, "Patches of Red."

Patches of Red  (ASR)
Thoughts of a soldier's other half
#1928876 by Emily

Patches of Red - Rewrite  (13+)
I wrote the original in April of 2013 - how has my writing changed since then?
#2199637 by Emily

Ohana means family. Honu means sea turtle *Heart*
A Piece Of My Heart  (18+)
A blog to house my musings, curiosities, and fascinations.
#2166092 by Emily
Entry · 09-02-19 10:40am
by Emily

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