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Sep 16, 2019 at 8:21pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: The Structure of Free Verse
Hey Dave, I am having a hard time today I accidentally sent you this poem as an email, sorry for that.

{cWhen a dream is crushed
By Lisa Noe

I had a job at a newspaper
My dream job or so I thought
It made me miserable as I
Was harassed and bullied
People think this only happens in school
But no! It can happen anywhere.
Told me, my writing wasn’t any good
It made me judge myself harshly
It made me actually hate my self.
It took years to undo all the bullying
Now I let people read my writing
Whether it is any good or not.
I lived out my dream to become a journalist
Writing as a reporter for the Enterprise
But beware of what you dream of
It may come back to haunt you later on.
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