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The elements of the Three-Five-Seven are: written in 3 lines, however the 3 lines may be broken into 6 lines at the caesura. measured, c counting words not syllables, L1 6 words, L2 = 10 words, L3 = 14 words (Most Chinese words are mono syllabic, therefore syllable count would be the same as word count in Chinese. Worm has interpreted the criteria to allow for English words that carry more than one syllable.) each line is broken mid way by caesura, L1 = 3, 3; L2 = 5,5 and L3 = 7,7. Thus the name Three-Five-Seven. each line carries a parallel, the halves of the line reflect or answer each other. Gracefully sleeping By Lisa Noe Graceful beauty sleep, sunshine upon her. She never weeps, she has peace. Love will always inspire her to give, Her heart is open and very pure. ![]() ![]() ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ |