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Sep 22, 2019 at 10:02am
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Re: jake's three five seven poems
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Charming, in so many ways!

Word counts are off:

Hot coffee

Hot coffee, makes my day - 5 words, should be 6
Must drink My coffee, as the morning dawns - 8 words, should be 10
With out my morning coffee , I am nothing at all - 10 words, should be 14


Black Cat Haunts My Life

The black cat, haunts my life *Check*
just staring at me, he is freaking me out - 9 words, should be 10
the evil black cat hates me, is he there to kill me off - 13 words, should be 14

Midas Touch

an old man, becomes gold - 5 words, should be 6
everything he touches, turning into gold - 6 words, should be 10
the realization hits him, as he takes his last golden breath - 11 words, should be 14

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
"The Poet's Place Open in new Window.
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jake's three five seven poems · 09-21-19 8:26pm
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