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Sep 22, 2019 at 12:26pm
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Re: Wordy Jay's - Form of the week: Three-Five-Seven
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Yep, I told you "powerful". In the last line I think caesura is inferred with your word "when", which almost stops the reader before they willingly read on. Thanks for entering this at
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