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Jan 17, 2020 at 2:36am
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jake's Love Duplex
by JCosmos Author IconMail Icon


I dreamt of meeting the love of my life
for seven long years she haunted my dreams

for seven long years she haunted my dreams
until one day she walked off a bus into my life

until one day she walked off a bus into my life
and the girl of my dreams became my wife

and the girl of my dreams became my wife
that day she walked off the bus began my life

that day she walked off the bus began my life
I begin every day looking at my wife

I begin every day looking at my wife
her love always brightens my lonely life
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jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 2:36am
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