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Jan 17, 2020 at 10:36am
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Re: jake's Love Duplex
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
One more couplet and you have a sonnet and it already written for you. Use the last line of what you have already written followed by the very first line of your poem.

her love always brightens my lonely life
I dreamt of meeting the love of my life.

There you go.

I loved this poem Jake. The form suits your style perfectly.

~~Tink
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