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Jan 17, 2020 at 10:47am
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Re: jake's Love Duplex
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*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to JCosmos Author Icon with this post.
As Tinker Author IconMail Icon just mentioned, you are missing a stanza and linkage back to the first line of the poem to complete the circle.

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jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 2:36am
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Re: jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 10:36am
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Re: Re: jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 7:10pm
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Re: Re: jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 7:22pm
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*Star* Re: jake's Love Duplex · 01-17-20 10:47am
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