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Jan 17, 2020 at 10:55am
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Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Duplex
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to Lisa Noe Author Icon with this post.
Powerful tribute!

Fourth and fifth stanzas are missing refrain from previous stanzas, and the last line has no linkage to the first line.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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