The Monthly Script Writing Contest

I'm very sad that you have decided not to reopen your scriptwriting forum. I'm currently working on the second part to my first entry. I have popped in from time to time checking on the status. I guess I should have wrote to you to find out if you were going to reopen it. I had so much fun writing my very first script. Well, unless you count the one in Fourth grade ... I will still write the second part to "The Red Umbrella Mystery." But I was hoping to see what you thought of the first one. I will be making my edit changes to it soon.