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Aug 13, 2020 at 7:25pm
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It's not a memory, this place. I'm not sure that it's safe, either.

I'm trying a new style of poetry, heavily inspired by Sylvia Plath, but want to make sure that I'm successfully conveying a scene despite the otherness. Thank you :)
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Bad News · 08-13-20 7:25pm
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