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Moving deeper into "A Friendship Is Renewed, Sort Of." I've moved/deleted a dozen or so chapters that dealt with Caleb's cousin -- the plot got really melodramatic with implied (or actual) deaths whose treatment I didn't really like. I also now see in Dylan a chance to tie this part of the continuity into some more recent invention. So I've snipped that part of the interactive back to the point where Will and Caleb sell Dylan a golem.

I'm now going down the path that starts with "Banking on Your New Disguise"