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May 1, 2021 at 8:23am

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Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: The Dobson

by Dan I Am

500 GPs were sent to Dave

with this post.

Oops. The 1st line had eight, so I should have stopped there.

How's this:

Mommy, may I go out and play?
It's really a very nice day.
And you won't have to be on guard,
'cause I won't go outside the yard.
May I really, Mom? Thanks a bunch.
I promise to come in for lunch.

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Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 04-30-21 10:16am
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Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 04-30-21 12:11pm
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Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 04-30-21 2:05pm
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Re: Mordee's Form of the week: The Dobson · 04-30-21 5:42pm
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Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-01-21 8:23am
by Dan I Am

Re: Re: Re: Mordee's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-01-21 4:00pm
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Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 04-30-21 6:45pm
by Jay O'Toole

Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-02-21 11:54am
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Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-02-21 4:25pm
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Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-03-21 11:30pm
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Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-04-21 3:44pm
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Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: The Dobson · 05-04-21 4:42pm
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Re: Form of the week: The Dobson · 07-06-21 12:34pm
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Re: Solace.Bring's Form of the week: The Dobson · 07-06-21 6:31pm
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