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May 25, 2021 at 6:14pm
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Re: Re: Review Request For Cross Timbers Member Application
Thank you so much Max for your insightful review and comments. I've been straining my brain a bit on how to continue and you've shown me how to make this story much better than it currently is, as well as how to continue. I do often write in the first person, but I wanted this story to end up being in the view of the three young dragons who eventually hatch from the eggs. I obviously forgot about the third-person limited POV. *FacePalm*

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Review Request For Cross Timbers Member Application · 05-24-21 11:47am
by Elfin Dragon-finally published
Re: Review Request For Cross Timbers Member Application · 05-25-21 5:16pm
by Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈
*Star* Re: Re: Review Request For Cross Timbers Member Application · 05-25-21 6:14pm
by Elfin Dragon-finally published

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