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Thank you for sharing this. It was indeed funny and I enjoyed reading it.
However, as nearly as I can tell, it's a memoir, or at least an essay rather than a short story. I reads like an amusing op-ed one might find the newspaper--it fact, it reads like a fine example of a funny op-ed. The thing is, though, it's not really presented as fiction, nor is it a story.
So, while it's well-written and funny, it doesn't quite fall within the realm of things I feel qualified to critique. As a consequence, other than saying, "well done," I'll have to pass on this.
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