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October Novel Prep Challenge

by Brandiwyn🎶

Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Writing · #1474311

A month-long novel-planning challenge. NaNoWriMo'ers welcome! 2026 sign-ups open Sept 1st.

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Oct 17, 2021 at 1:12pm

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Re: Contest Round Excitement

by Olivia‘s recovering

Good job, Rookie.

What's great about the story is that you don't feel that Guy's gonna be the antagonist. I just felt so sorry for the poor chap

: losing his parents, the unresolved father issue, his try to be true to their last wishes, him being slowly led astray... him being the shining knight for the girl.

(Yeah, I know I'm such a sappy romantic.

It would be a pity to see Anakin turn into Darth for sure.

If you're curious, here's mine:"Second Chance ("Antagonist" Background Story)"

Can you find the antagonist?

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Contest Round Excitement · 10-16-21 4:56pm
by Past Member 'stolenthrones'

Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-16-21 7:54pm
by NormaJean AKA Writing Queen

Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-16-21 10:27pm
by Past Member 'stolenthrones'

Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 12:23am
by Adherennium

Re: Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 1:23am
by Past Member 'stolenthrones'

Re: Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 11:14am
by NormaJean AKA Writing Queen

Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 12:55pm
by Adherennium

Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 1:12pm
by Olivia‘s recovering

Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 1:51pm
by Schnujo's having school probs

Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 2:22pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 2:27pm
by Schnujo's having school probs

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Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 2:26pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 5:11pm
by NormaJean AKA Writing Queen

Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 5:09pm
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Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 5:17pm
by Past Member 'stolenthrones'

Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 6:26pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 6:31pm
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Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 4:59pm
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Re: Re: Contest Round Excitement · 10-17-21 5:13pm
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