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Nov 5, 2021 at 1:43pm
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Edited: November 5, 2021 at 1:45pm
Re: Jake's coffee Pathya Vat
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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Charming!

Last lines of last two stanzas are each a syllable short.

In last stanza, lines two and three should rhyme with "smiling."

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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coffee Pathya Vat · 11-04-21 8:18am
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*Star* Re: Jake's coffee Pathya Vat · 11-05-21 1:43pm
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Re: Re: Jake's coffee Pathya Vat · 11-19-21 10:20am
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