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Nov 7, 2021 at 3:38am
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Re: Form of the week: Logolilt

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The world was hardly kind to her;
time was a blur
each day.
Her agony inside was real.
She couldn’t feel
okay.

My hand reached out to take her own,
comfort intone,
be there.
I wanted to allay her pain,
remove the chain,
show care.





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Poet’s Place Café prompt: poetry form, Logolilt

(11.07.21)
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