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Your work is upbeat, showing the love of your father as he helped you find a totally new way of expression (through the stereo). The pleasure you felt with the ongoing use of this special gift is evident and the poem makes clear that you have evolved a special affinity to music that fits into your worldview. The words flow nicely and the ideas are clearly expressed. The reader (me) is drawn along by your enthusiasm as I share the experience with you. Thanks for sharing! |