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Dec 15, 2021 at 2:45pm
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Re: Form of the week: Saraband
Here's my attempt, English style:


Please take my hand and float with me.
Let the music guide your spirit.
Goodbye to sorrows, dance carefree.
Wash dulcet lyrics through your veins.
Clear your soul of caustic factors.
Ride the wave of vibrant refrains.
On this stage we're more than actors.

Let's dance to that which moves our souls.
Lilting waltzes, flailing metal,
drive our bodies in starring roles.
Feel the strings, the keys, the drumming.
Make the sounds and words your essence.
Soak up words that leave you humming.
Savor music's incandescence.
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