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I found your poem on Read & Review. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful. Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: This was a poem of frustration about the niceties of modern life, how dress codes are really irrelevant when it comes right down to it. Artistic Voice and Imagery: I liked the rhyming you did, it lent realism and depth to your work. "I've played the game and paid my dues. And anyway, it's Saturday" This was a very amusing line. You stand tall in determination to do as you wish, but end 'anyway, it's Saturday' which kinda whimps out the entire tirade. I love it! Grammar No errors noted Suggestions: No suggestions to be made. Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! ** Image ID #1791777 Unavailable **  |
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