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Jun 3, 2022 at 3:32pm
Romance story disagreement
by NYPen
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I am writing a short romance story and in the first chapter the two main characters have a very passionate kiss. I had my wife critique the story and she said it is too soon. What are your thoughts?
Romance story disagreement · 06-03-22 3:32pm
by NYPen
Re: Romance story disagreement · 06-03-22 7:04pm
by WakeUpAndLive~whereartthoumuse
Re: Re: Romance story disagreement · 06-03-22 10:06pm
by NYPen
Re: Re: Re: Romance story disagreement · 06-07-22 3:45pm
by edgework
Re: Romance story disagreement · 06-27-22 8:23pm
by DelK

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