It all depends of course. Did they meet in the first chapter for the first time? Is it believable they kissed so soon? Is it realistic to their personality or the situation? As you know there are people who jump into bed after the first two hours of their meet. So, a passionate kiss is also plausible. Are you satisfied it can happen that quickly? If the answer is yes, go for it.
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