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Feb 23, 2023 at 9:55am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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HELL
There is no place to get ice cream
I wish this was only a dream
I thought it was hot up there
Down here no seasons to share
Sick of burgers always burnt
This is a place I wish I wern't
No water here if you want a drink
With all this heat what do you think
There is fire everywhere you look
What good is fire? nothing to cook
With these words I've tried to weave
Here in hell this is my pet Peeve.



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DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-20-23 2:33pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-22-23 9:21pm
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Re: Jake's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-23-23 10:56am
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*Star* Re: DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-23-23 9:55am
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-23-23 10:59am
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Re: Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Rigors of Revision · 02-24-23 9:14am
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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