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Jul 25, 2023 at 11:24pm
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review request: the blessed realm
by Past Member 'mhemmings'
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 (This message was edited by mathguy on 07-26-23 @ 8:06 am EDT)

an evil, a bargain, a hero with friends, choices to aid or defeat the evil


a completed novel, seeking fine tuning any confusing bits (not foreshadowing), timeline of events -make sense?

does the main character suffer enough?

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the first five sections are there.
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review request: the blessed realm · 07-25-23 11:24pm
by Past Member 'mhemmings'
Re: review request: the blessed realm · 07-26-23 8:08am
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Re: Re: review request: the blessed realm · 07-26-23 10:45pm
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Re: review request: the blessed realm · 08-05-23 11:43am
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