October Novel Prep Challenge

Hallo, Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love .

This is just a bare scene as one writes it in a short amount of time like the two days of contest. So don't worry about that. The basic conflict is strong: two brothers thinking their handicapped sister is an incapable (physical!) vegetable.

I honestly wanted to slap the two poopheads, and cheered for Sabrandra (dude, stumbled over that name.). A feisty gal, not letting herself down because of her challenges. You created quite an impressive character I easily rooted for.

Usually, I'm sensitive about mothers because my own was a poophead, too, but you don't talk bad about deceased people, sorry. I LOVED Valerie, and wished my Mom was a bit like her. I think you might like my MMC, Vince's, Mum, Shona. She's a Scot, and a true Lady (her father's a Lord), but decided during her year abroad to stay in New York with Vince's Dad, Vincenzo, and to marry him and become a teacher, her secret dream.

If you like, in "~7~ How did you know, Dad? (Protagonist Background)"  Vince's dad tells about how they met, and it helps Vince resolve a problem.