Unlike the others I do think there can be too much kissing (unless you are writing a romance, which I don't read lol), but I'm sure yours is fine. Great job finishing your outline! I still need to do Act III...then start revising it. Hahaha!
Unapologetic Witch, that's an awesome idea for the beginning of a horror movie! A toddler spelling out things with their Alphabet soup or cereal...RUN...DIE...DEMON
.. At first it's cute and exciting then, YIKES! Lol
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