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Jul 16, 2024 at 3:08pm
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Edited: July 17, 2024 at 1:14pm
Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Imitation
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
"A Piano in the Sand

A piano in the sand
could be,
like all other seashore debris, damaged
& waterlogged

but a piano in the sand compels a musician

unlike an empty bottle
a hat or a hammock,
a piano can make magical sounds

to capture
an audience of just one or many for
a time

maybe you

to be remembered
not to be washed away
                    ~~Judi Van Gorder

An imitation or Projack   of:

A Chair in Snow   by Jane Hirshfield

A chair in snow
should be
like any other object whited
& rounded

and yet a chair in snow is always sad

more than a bed
more than a hat or house
a chair is shaped for just one thing

to hold
a soul its quick and few bendable
hours

perhaps a king

not to hold snow
not to hold flowers
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DISCUSSION: Imitation · 07-15-24 6:04pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Imitation · 07-19-24 2:34am
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Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: Imitation · 07-22-24 3:40pm
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